whole days
composed…mmm
of time.
falling
in languorous
drops
of stretched
moments, dripping
like lingering
honey, falling
from the sky
eternity
on the
tip
of your
tongue.
taste.
let it drip
evermore,
……………………………………….evermore
April 3, 2006 by walkingbroken
whole days
composed…mmm
of time.
falling
in languorous
drops
of stretched
moments, dripping
like lingering
honey, falling
from the sky
eternity
on the
tip
of your
tongue.
taste.
let it drip
evermore,
……………………………………….evermore
oooh i like this one. especially the spacing effect.
Does it have a specific shape?
Yup…trying for a languorous dripping shape. Ha ha…realised my aesthetics are fine but my design skills, if you can call it that, kinda rank rather lowly – let’s say a little below neanderthal
Reminds me of e.e cummings. I once saw a poem with a shape of a pink flamingo. Cute. Haha.
Okay, not sure if it was pink but it felt so.
aren’t all flamingos pink?
(is random)
right. dripping effect it is. really liquid-like. but don’t you go insane fromating everything?
hmm.
thanks for the chocolates, btw. (:
no it did not help the endolphins, but well,
all in love and war (and STUPIDLITESSAYSFORTHEMOE) is fair.
mr sng!
hellos hellos!
sabs made me go read yr blog.
apparently she liked some entry.
but i cant rmb what.
hmms.
anws. jiayouus on your walk with God!
walk by faith*
smiles.
takkaire!
Yeah I see a drop… but.. that’s about it.
Nicely done though Mr. Sng!
Anyhow, the class did a vote today – 3/C would like Romeo and Juliet for the movie. x)
What happened to you today? *we joked you stayed up too late watching the ManU vs Arsenal match*
Berenice’s poems are at http://www.fictionpress.com/~lspeakl
I’ll leave my url again, in case you didn’t see the comment i made for .. i think it was “i still adore you”. Yeah. You asked to see our poems. xP Though I haven’t written much lately.
Ciao.
Charis
mr sng mr sng! man u beat arsenal two nil ! YAYE YAYE ! ((((x
okay hahah.
-grins
anyways takecare !
THERE ARE PEOPLE WITH FICPRESS ACCOUNTS FROM CEDAR????!!!?!
-faints&dies
HELLO FEDORA (: HELLO BRUDDER!
hahaha.
hello mr sng!
uh, HELLO?
FOUR N rocks.
TWELFTH NIGHT rocks.
CEDAR rocks.
aye, so out of point (:
yeah what’s wrong with having a ficpress account, BIG(: ??? I have one too! And so does my friend who went to TJC for IP..
*and here I thought only OUR generation knew about it*… xP
HELLOOOOO!! CHARIS! YOU ARENT SUPPOSED TO GO AROUND GIVING MY LINKS AWAY (despite me being so generous) WITHOUT MY PERMISSION!! its bad enough that my brownie receipe is now being handed around sec3s like i dunno, wildfire? but yeah! DONT DO THAT. and that link was wrong anyway. WRONG. MUAHAHAHA. *coughs* anyway, for the poem…
THE SHAPE IS REALLY CUTE!! XDDD just that is ‘moments dripping’ a bit out of place? other than that, its really laidback and syrupy. i also like the mood of the poem.
i like how you liken time to how honey drips. honey is thick and it drips slowly. time is forever and if it drips, i guess it would be like honey. dripping slowly and uhh.. thickly? lol. anyway, i like honey. honey is cute. honey is nice. but honey dripping forevermore sounds.. wrong. such a waste of honey. o_0
oh. and i like to hold a drop of honey on my tongue when im bored. its really fun. try to hold it without swallowing it or drooling. XD you can try it with other stuff too. but i cant vouch for your safety if you put stuff like soap or mercury on your tongue. just hope that its fun while it lasts. XD
o.O Ber??? You said OKAY!!! hrmpf… what do you MEAN “w/o my permission?” … :S
oh yeah… it IS wrong… xP sorry.
nothing’s wrong with FP! just that I didn’t know any cedarians actually had accounts there. ;-;
http://www.fictionpress.com/~persianeyes
whats yours Charis?
http://www.fictionpress.com/~fantasticbouncygirl
ignore the name. x) it’s a little “superhero” alias theincredibles.com christened me with after i played some game on it.
I have a half-done chaptered fic down there which suffers an incredibly weak plot and some major plotholes, hence needs major editing – I just haven’t bothered to take it down nor get started on it again. The rest are just my more refined works of poetry. If my work can be called “refined” at all.
uhm. this area is becoming something like a forum i realised. lol. anyway, MR SNG, UPDATE!!~~ @@