Sooohoooowdeeeedyoooo
oreeeeguuuuurrrrrrrrrlsssssdoooooo
they got a bronze.
Ooooooooooooooooooohdaaaaat’s
noooooooooootummmmmmmmmmsooooooooo
oooooooooooooobaaaaaaaaaaaaaermmmmmmmm
mmmmmmmyeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahwhat
deeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeddeeeeeygiiiiiiiiiiitl
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasttime
COP. Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeytheeeeeeeeeeey
Deeddooooooooooooooooooobetteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrm
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaybeeeeeeeeeeeenexttimmmmmmmmmmmme
gooooooooooooooooooooooold?
i’m just glad they did their best.
Coooooooooooooough
That’s all anyone can ask of anyone, right?
cough
gold
May 3, 2007 by walkingbroken
what the devil!! you call this poetry? what? another funny lil concrete poetry thingy??!! haha.
I think i understand. Mr Sng, just write it out in simple english.We did our best
LOLOL OMG YOU CLD’VE JUST TOLD US THAT
INSTEAD OF MAKING ME READ FOR 5 MINS
TRYING TO UNDERSTAND
YOU CLDVE TOLD US THAT EARLIER
INSTEAD OF US, DYING IN CONFUSION
AT LEAST NO COP RIGHT! WE’RE SO HAPPY, REALLY REALLY.
OH & ITS OKAY. VS GOT A BRONZE TOO RIGHT?
ITS OKAY.
DRAMA IS TOUGH ):
AND ITS OKAY.
WE GOT A BRONZE YAY
yup they got a bronze..it took me so LOOONNNNGGGGGGG! to read that small message!!…hahaha…but i agree…im sure they’ll do much better next time….GOLD!!…:)..
haha. the person asking u all those questions sounds like some old fella..haha
everybody knows the whle SYF standard was raised this time around.
Are you sure that was the nicest way to put it across to your EL members?? :S
haha. what a fun poem!
I had fun figuring out what on earth you were trying to say. What a way to put across a simple but important message. Some ppl are just so annoying, no? Don’t worry i also understand the syf pressure thingy. I’m sure your “guuuuurrrrrrrrrlsssss” will get what they want come next time. 
Mr sng, infinite thanks for teaching me for the past 2 years
Glad to know they have tried their very best, and hopefully they have enjoyed themselves, despite the mad, harrowing rat race where teams slough it out for the glory of the name, of transient gold and repute, rather than the love of the art itself. Salut to all the rats who have kindly participated, praise be high for what their pains and troubles…
-karyn, 4N/06
hello(:
Okay!That was so helpful.
I spent three minutes reading this,and thirty seconds reading the SYF results list.
XD
Hi Quincy!
Thank you all for your comments!
i resolve to begin once more to respond to individual comments!
y’know, long before you even posted this, Isis was already gossiping about us getting bronze. XD
i guess drama and the literary arts are just not cedar’s thing.
havent dropped by in ages. omglol. ahahhahahahahahaha. i can practically hear it being read out loud.
why, its carol ann duffy!
how are you anyway, havent seen you in aaaages